雅思考试对于许多考生来说是一个重要的挑战。为了帮助考生更好地应对雅思考试，本文将重点介绍雅思考试学习技巧，并提供如何有效利用雅思写作范文的建议。首先，我们将探讨针对雅思考试的学习技巧，包括如何制定学习计划、如何提高听力和口语技能，以及如何应对阅读和写作部分。其次，针对雅思写作，我们将分享如何有效利用雅思写作范文来提高自己的写作能力。通过本文的介绍，考生们将能够更好地理解雅思考试的要求，掌握有效的学习方法，提高自己的写作能力，从而更好地备战雅思考试。
烤鸭宝宝小涵说，背了很多经典模板句子，记了N多高分词汇，但雅思写作分数一直停留在5分，我可着急呢，难道就没有什么好的写作技巧方法么？
当然是有方法的，对此，广之旅精英教育出国考试研究院唐院长要给准备雅思考试的烤鸭宝宝们分享雅思写作的高分经验。
我们先以这个题目为例子来讲解雅思高分作文要怎么写，如下：
More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh its disadvantages for environment?
作文题讨论的是越来越多的人买车对个人和环境是好还是坏？要如何构思这篇作文呢？我们来看看唐老雅老师分享雅思作文范文以及如何有效利用雅思写作范文：
第1段：
Just 50 years ago, to own a car was quite a luxury, but today, cars have found their way into many households. Statistics show in China alone, there are over 140 million cars running on road every day. While cars have brought conveniences to their users, they have imposed great pressure on the environment.
唐老雅老师点评：
开头段的重点是看你如何引出话题，并对题目进行重述，以及如何表达自己的总体观点的。引出话题的方法很多，但不少烤鸭喜欢使用模板开头法，比如，with the development of the society... 或者when it comes to the issue of...等，这些模板的确是万能的，几乎可以适合任何话题，但恰恰因为其万能性，它也就失去了个性化，让作文开头千篇一律，没有任何特色。
唐老雅老师建议：根据题目的实际内容，可以考虑在引出话题的时候将其具体化。也就是说，不要简单粗暴地提出一个话题，而是对这个话题进行适当具体说明。在本例中，题目的原话是：more and more people buy and use their own car. 我们当然可以这样开头：With the development of economy, now many people can afford to buy and use their own car. 但这种开头显得过于一般，不容易打动考官。如果我们把题目中“越来越多的人购买和使用自己的汽车”进行具体化，我们可能就会问：大约是什么时候越来越多的人购买汽车？到底有多少人购买汽车？这样，我们就可以在这个开头中提供更多与讨论相关的细节了。
烤鸭们请记住：在作文中提供相关具体细节越多，作文的水平就越高。老雅的范文开头引入了购买汽车的话题，然后接下去再补充细节，这个细节就比较具体生动地改写题目中“越来越多的人购买和使用自己的汽车”这句话了。
各位烤鸭可以马上来练习一下，看以下两题雅思作文应该如何开头。
1. City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has been lost. Why has this happened and how to solve this problem? （9月24日真题）
2. The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crime in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（5月20日真题）
然后，请各位将自己写的与老雅范文来比较一下。
1. Now we have numerous newspaper reports about a child being robbed without anybody offering to help him or a ninety-year-old poor woman dead at home for days without anybody knowing it. All these reports point to one key problem that face dwellers in cities, especially big cities: they seldom interact with their neighbors, much less to say they care about their neighbors and they feel lonely because they do not feel they belong to any community.
2. There seems to be more and more violence in films and on TV these days such as beating, murdering, gun fighting, blood shedding, among others. As I see it, the excessive exposure to these violent scenes will greatly affect the theater-goers and TV viewers, thus increasing the likelihood of their committing the same violent crimes in real life, so I would strongly suggest that the amount of violence in films and TV be controlled in order to decrease the crime rate in society.
我们现在又回到第2段：
Modern city life has made the car an indispensable means of transport. Though most cities today have fairly advanced transportation systems like the bus and metro, they tend to be extremely crowded, especially in rush hours. This means you might come to your office late or miss some important appointments. If you drive your own car, these problems may well be avoided. At the same time, when you plan to take your family for a trip out of town, you may also enjoy the flexibility of when to start off and when to return, rather than spending time waiting for the bus to arrive.
唐老雅老师点评：
本段讨论使用自己的汽车可能带来的好处，分两个方面讨论：一是自己开车可以避免上班迟到或错误重要约会，而是自己开车和家人外出时也更方便。那么如何才能清晰地论证这两层意思呢？请各位烤鸭先看本段的结构：第一句从总体上提炼“现代城市生活使得汽车成为一种不可或缺的交通手段”，接下来先讲一个方面，然后用at the same time引出另外一个方面，这样的结构可从整体上确保逻辑连贯。
然后，我们再深入看老雅对第一层意思的论述：“虽然多数城市多有很发达的公交和地铁系统，但它们非常拥挤，尤其是在高峰拥堵时刻。这就意味着你可能上班迟到或者错误重要约会。如果你开自己的车，这些问题就可以避免。”这三句话环环相扣，自然接续。第二层论述则从自己开车可以灵活安排出发时间和回家时间，不必浪费时间等车来论证。
语言方面，烤鸭们可以重点看看这些词汇：indispensable（不可或缺的）; advanced（高级的）; appointment（约会）; flexibility（灵活性）; start off（出发）。从句子长度安排来看，本段共5个句子，分别为短句-长句-短句-短句-长句，显得错落有致。在论证第二层意思时，老雅使用了一个长句，其原因是之前的两个句子都属于短句，这里写一个长句可以起到改变行文节奏的作用。但若仔细看，这个长句的结构其实一点也不复杂：when you..., you may also enjoy..., rather than...。大家平时在段落写作中，也可以有意识地练习混合长短句来表达思想。
第3段：
However, the increased use of cars has caused serious consequences for our environment. Many experts, for instance, attribute the worsening air quality in big cities to the cars’ exhaust gas emission and the dust that rises after them. This accusation is perhaps well-grounded if you make a little comparison between the air quality 50 years ago and that now. In addition to the waste gas and dust, cars also make unbearable noises, which is a headache to all city dwellers. Just imagine a time you are shocked awake from your cozy dream by the sharp braking screech of a car passing by your house!
唐老雅老师点评：
本段论证私家车的增多对环境带来的压力，还是从两个方面来展开论述：一是汽车尾气带来的空气污染，二是汽车噪音给城市居民带来的困扰。本段从一个统领的主题句the increased use of cars has caused serious consequences for our environment开始，然后讨论空气污染问题（共2句），最后讨论噪音问题（共2句）。这样，本段共5句话，结构非常均衡。其中，在讨论噪音问题时，使用了一个想象的情境（“想象一下，某次一辆汽车从你屋前经过，刺耳的刹车声把你从美梦中惊醒！”），让整篇论文摆脱了枯燥无味的说理，有相当浓厚的个性化特色。这种论述方法被称为“以情动人”，很多时候可以作为“以理服人”的补充。在雅思作文中，如果交替使用“道理”和“感情”，文章就会显得更加灵活生动。
语言方面，烤鸭们可重点学习consequence（后果）; attribute...to...（把......归咎于......）; worsening（不断恶化的）; accusation（指责，指控）; well-grounded（有根据的）等。在Many experts attribute the worsening air quality in big cities to the cars’ exhaust gas emission and the dust that rises after them一句中，如果不用attribute...to...或相似的结构，我们可能会这样写：Now, the air quality in big cities is becoming worse and worse. Many experts believe this is because of the exhaust gas the cars emit and the dust that rises after them. 这样写当然也是不错的，但从句型紧凑的角度就做得不够。烤鸭们可以经常做做这样的思维练习，即：如果不用范文中的某个句子结构，我怎样写才能表达出范文中的意思？
第4段：
In my view, it is unrealistic for the government to put a ban on the car ownership or use since the cars have been so important in our daily life, yet we cannot overlook the negative effects they have on the environment. To get out of this dilemma, to my mind, there are two options, the first being to develop car technology and produce cars that burn less fuel and the second, encourage the car owners to use public transportation whenever possible.
唐老雅老师点评：
本段表达自己的观点。对于这类双边讨论的话题，结尾段一定要鲜明地提出自己的观点。本范文是这样构思的：政府出面来限制私人汽车的购买和使用是不现实的，但私家车的负面后果又不可忽视，那怎么办呢？有两个办法，一是开发新的汽车技术，少用燃料，二是鼓励私人多用公共交通服务。
语言方面，烤鸭可关注这些词汇：unrealistic（不现实的）; put a ban on...（限制......）；overlook（忽视）; dilemma（困境）; option（选择）等。在To get out of this dilemma, to my mind, there are two options, the first being to develop car technology...一句中，注意being的正确形式，这里使用的是独立主格结构，being不能替换为is。这个结构很多同学难以掌握，可以改写如下，以确保正确性：To get out of this dilemma, to my mind, there are two options. The first is to develop car technology..., and the second is to encourage...
来源：精英教育出国考试研究院唐院长
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